Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Pleadian Thanksgiving

Kirk Carter@ Chew Bear Productions@ Copyright 2015








VOYAGE TO EARTH (9)






Pleadian Thanksgiving








Int: Room Of Atmospheric Forecasting-A.M.


Blaze looking at "Storm Scope", detecting large storm approaching Atlantis.




Blaze running over to Lord Fredric's chambers


"Lord, where are thee...ya here?"




Lord Fredric taking out earbuds


"Yes, did I hear a distraction, someone summon me?"




Blaze


"Just wanted you to know that a big storm is coming, it's headed this way...a big one!"




Lord Fredric


"Again, didn't we have one of those a couple of moons before?"




Blaze


"Yea, they cycle in and out, they're moving around all over the place...think of it as the atmosphere filling up with air and giving back...lows and highs!"




Lord Fredric


"A bit like peeing I presume?"




Blaze


"Yea...something like that...anyway prepare, it's coming..."




(Scene Switch)


Ext: Brenda's Balcony


She's brushing her hair, looking around, see's Blaze with buckets passing below.




Brenda


"Good morning Blaze, is it me, or does it look like the sky wants to pee this morning?"




Blaze stopping


"Yea...morning...a lot of peeing...we haven't had this much liquid falling from the sky like this, so try to stay dry...I got to go!"




Brenda


"But, I was going to go exercising in the water."




Blaze


"I wouldn't go near it right now, the surface is wavy and hard to float in, might suck you in...wait till later okay?"




(Scene Switch)


Ext: Beach


Subhumans along beach watching huge fish jumping out of water and splashing back down.




Subhuman #1


"What make fish jump like that?"




Subhuman #2


"Something chasing them, tired of being wet...maybe monster try to eat them?"




Subhuman #1


"What's a monster?"




Subhuman #2


"Don't know, but probably mean, want to eat fish, smell like salt water!"




Subhuman #1 looking disgusted


"Well yea, what would you do if you in smelly water all day?"




Subhuman #2 looking up


"Does sky look funny to you...the water be wiggling, look like trouble?"




Subhuman #1


"Anything else you want to complain about...what's next?"




Subhuman #2


"Feeling rain drops, let's get out of wet!"


(Suddenly big wave comes crashing in, sucking him into the sea)




Subhuman #2 turning around


"This is no time for swimming, you crazy?"




Subhuman #1 screaming


"Save me, me not able to breath in wet!"




Subhuman #2


"No kidding, you also annoying when you like that!"




Subhuman #1


"Me not annoying, please help me?"




Subhuman #2


"You smell like fish now, I not crazy like you."


(Suddenly another wave comes in carrying drowning subhuman #1, placing him neatly on the beach in front of #2)




Subhuman #2


"Now what are you doing, tired of games...water too wet for you?"




Subhuman #1


"I don't know what happened...something saved me...I go home now!"




Subhuman #2


"You go home right...your brain squishy, you not right...smell like fish...now go!"


(Storm starts to come in, wind starts blowing hard)


(Subhumans running toward shelter screaming, tripping over each other)




(Scene Switch)




Int: Lord Fredric's Chambers




Lord Fredric looking through window at storm talking to himself


"My, this doesn't look good...this may take many dark times to dry up...right?"




Blaze running in


"Lord, there is stuff falling out of sky that I've never seen before!"




Lord Fredric


"Rubbish, just rubbish...from parts unseen!"




Blaze


"Parts what, what unseen parts?"




Lord Fredric pointing to sea


"Over there, and around the curve...places backed up with rubbish that grows differently...falls off trees, then it is dumped on us..."




Blaze


"Like a natural cycle?"




"Heck no, just clutters of rubbish that can come at anytime...it's just trashing up the place...beyond our control I would think, at least at this point!"




Blaze


"Well, if it is a natural cycle, maybe the rubbish will be of some use to us?"




Lord Fredric laughing


"Using it for what...it's using us my boy, look at it...just piling up out there!"


(Scene Switch)


(Two Hours Later)




Ext: A Path outside Blaze's laboratory


(Walking along with Mark with trash scoopers)




Blaze


"You know, these are some unusual looking pods that fell during the storm, wonder what they could be?"




Mark


"The Lord said it was just rubbish (pointing to the sea), from around there...who knows?"




Blaze


"I get this feeling that all this could be something else!"


Mark


"You mean somebody else's?"




Blaze


"Yea, but somebody else's what?"




Mark


"Rubbish...your not paying attention to the Lord...are you?"




Blaze


"It's not the final word...it's not the end all...he doesn't know everything, he's failed before!"




Mark


"That's true, so I guess he is like us...got his good days and bad days, huh?"




Blaze


"He's a man like us...now on the other hand, Brenda is a girl...we haven't been able to figure them out...not yet anyway!"




Mark


"She perfect, she amazing, I survive for her..."




Blaze


"No, she let you survive, you were the only one who got to come along, like a...like a Love Puppet!"




Mark


"I should be confused and offended, but I have no clue what you just said...but I'll be there for her always!"




Blaze


"Good boy, just keep her happy, that's all she'll ever ask of you!"




Mark starts singing


"I'm your Love Puppet, I want you..."




Blaze


"Please stop that, it's annoying, very irritating!"




Mark


"What's the problem?"




Blaze


"Look, I'm only going to tell you once, if Brenda hears you singing like that, she's going to change her mind about keeping you around!"






Mark


"Then what?"




Blaze


"Probably feed you to the fishes...she is the Queen, who knows?"




Mark cringes


"I get it now, I'm just a puppet on a string, I thought she brought me for my intellect?"




Blaze


"If that was the case you would have been space dust right now!"


(Scene Switch)


(1 Month Later)




Int: Blaze's Laboratory


Blaze has worked feverously to plant the founded seeds and pods. 
The results start showing up as the plants spring to life.


(Scene Switch)




Blaze running into Lord Fredric's chambers with buckets full of sweet potatoes, carrots, peas, and corn


"Lord, Lord look...the pods, the seeds...they have produced, we have new things to feast on!"




Lord Fredric in Cavalier tone


"Oh, really now...are you sure these are consumable?"




Blaze looking through bucket


"Well, I'm pretty sure...we might have to zap them a few times with the Laser, you know...to soften them up, but I don't see any problems..."




Lord Fredric


"Feed some to the Commoners, and then we'll see!"




Blaze


"Why not let Mark try it...he'll eat anything?"




Lord Fredric


"We can't afford to lose Mark, my daughter would have a fit!"


(Scene Switch)


(1 Week Later)




Int: Grand Dining Hall


Mark, Brenda, Blaze, and Lord Fredric sitting down at large feast on table.




Lord Fredric tapping glass


"I would like to make a toast to Blaze, who's persistence has thoroughly amazed me, as I am sure all of us...he has indeed risen to the highest level of nutritional achievement...Blaze, we raise our glass to honor thee!"




Brenda eating some sweet potatoes leaning to Mark


"You know, I could smear this all over myself and keep you busy for hours!




Mark


"That's not like a sock puppet right?"




Brenda


"Sock what?"




Mark


"Never mind...we'll try that later...sounds fun!"




Blaze


"Well, this finding, this harvest is a blessing, from an unknown source, provided from over there (pointing to the sea), over there around the other side, where the spirit lives, whom created the planets, and all that's within...we are indeed blessed...Lord, did you have anything to say in closing?"




Lord Fredric clearing his throat


"Well, this is certainly an improvement over our staple of edibles...I think it's high time to announce my final plan of action...for the very thing that has created havoc ever since we left home..."


(Everyone looking confused)




Brenda


"Dad, what could possibly be so awful?"




Lord Fredric


"The Lima Bean...we shall ban it forever!"




(Everyone Clapping)




Blaze


"I second that!"




Lord Fredric


"And furthermore, I proclaim this our day of thanks...
Let Them Come Before Him With Thanksgiving (Psalm 95:2)...
I read that somewhere...and so...
Happy Thanksgiving everyone!"




Mark leaning to Brenda


"It's weird how your Dad just comes up with these holidays and stuff..."




Brenda smiling


"Yep, that's my Dad...he is the Lord!"




Lord Fredric


"And it shall be done!"








(Scene Close)



























































































Saturday, November 14, 2015

Venture To Earth (8) Girl Trouble

Kirk Carter@ Chew Bear Productions@ Copyright 2015





VENTURE TO EARTH (8)



Girl Trouble



Int: Brenda's Sleeping Quarters-A.M.


Blaze running in.

"Brenda...wake up, wake up, we've got problems!"


Brenda

"I think I already know...Mark's complaining about not getting any...again!"


Blaze

"No, this is girl problems, they're getting aggressive..."


Brenda

"Oh, they're not getting enough either...it figures!"


Blaze

"Something like that...come see!"


(Scene Switch)

Ext: Subhuman Girl's dorm

Girls holding boy down with stick to his throat


Brenda walking up

"Hey, hey...what's going on?"


Subhuman Girl #1

"I want this one, he be one I pick!"


Brenda

"No girl, your going about this all wrong..."


Girl #1

"But what...how, he the one, will not do what I need?"


Brenda

"Did you ask him if he wanted to give you what you need?"


Girl #1

"For what...he boy...don't they always need to give?"


Brenda laughing

"You would think so, but it would be polite to ask first."


Girl #1

"Okay, I ask..."

(Pushing stick further against his neck)

"You want me yes...say yes or I kill you?"


Brenda grabbing stick out of girl's hand

"Hold it child, apparently you got off on the wrong foot with all of this, gimme that thing!"


Girl #1

"What I do wrong, we taught that boys need to give?"


Brenda

"Depends on what they're into...now take my Mark for instance...all I have to do is look at him and he pops..."


Girl #1

"Pops?"


Brenda

"Yea, never mind...bad example...but the point I'm trying to make is they, well heck...we're just all different, so you have to meet them first, see if they're interested...you know, talk to them..."


Girl #1

"Then he pop...he give what me need?"


Brenda

"Usually...sometimes you have to feed them, they seem to like that...fuel 'em up so to speak."


Girl #1

"So, they like pet...eat, then train, like that?"


Brenda

"Yea, that's close enough...pretty good actually...look, it's better, heck...anything is better than what your doing here, now let him up!"

As girl releases stick (again) from his neck, the boy immediately gets up and starts running away. Girls track him down a few steps and start attacking him.


Brenda

"Now girls, stop that...let him go...face it, he's not interested."


Girl #1

"Oh he will, after I give him good beating, he learn, then maybe I'll feed him, too!"


Brenda flagging down Blaze

"Hey, come here..."


Blaze

"What happened?"


Brenda

"Well nothing yet...we need to talk with my Dad and see if we can't get some counseling going for these guys...this is not working out?"


Blaze

"Okay, no problem...does this have any problems with the guys putting out?"


Brenda

"Exactly, have any clues why they're not receptive to a little companionship?"


Blaze

"Something in the water...the fish...you know they've been eating a lot of fish lately?"


 (Scene Switch)

INT: Lord Fredric's Quarters

Brenda and Blaze show up


Brenda

"Hi Dad, everything okay?"


Lord Fredric
 
"Well, I was trying to help Mark figure out the sewer problem...what is all this flush this, flush that, just what is the best way of moving this sludge?"


Brenda

"Don't worry Dad, I'm sure there is a solution, but look...the females are attacking the males, what can we do?"


Lord Fredric

"We should all have such problems, why mess up natural selection, it's only natural to have the drive to procreate, don't you think?


Brenda

"Normally yes, but we have the girls forcing the males to copulate...that's not natural."


Lord Fredric

"And at what point did you become a moral manipulator...dictating to groups how natural desire is manifested...there are no rules to normality when it comes to companionship, is there?


Brenda

"Look, I'm holding a girl in custody, that chillin hole thing you came up with...she was holding a stick to a boy's neck for not putting out...I don't need your sermon for morality right now!"


Lord Fredric scratching his chin

"Heavens...he wouldn't do the deed, huh...did she feed him?"


Brenda

"I don't think she was waiting for him to feed...come on Dad, we need to do something!"


Mark comes in

"Hey Lord, I think I solved the crapper problem...it's in the venting..."


Lord Fredric

"Hold on my boy, we seem to have a mating problem...we're trying to figure something out here."


Mark

"Mating problem, what's wrong Brenda, I'm ready...you ready, I'm always ready, lets go!"

 
Brenda

"See Dad, something's not right here...Mark is always ready, I just give the nod."


Lord Fredric

"We all know this, so why the imbalance with my children, what's troubling the young lads?"


Blaze

"They could be interested in other guys, like folic conjuring, maybe just self-absorbed with other activities..."

(Everyone just staring in disgust at Blaze)

Blaze

"Or not?"


Lord Fredric

"Okay, let's consider this, perhaps there was something wrong with the way you programmed them?"


Blaze slapping himself in the forehead

"Testosterone!"


Brenda

"To Test what?"


Lord Fredric

"What was that?"


Mark

"What is it?"


Blaze
 
"Male hormones, that explains why they're not interested, it's created in their testicles...I think?"


Lord Fredric

"What can we do, is it too late to fix this little oversight?"


Blaze

"Well...I mean, there's a lot of stuff to program in there...I was using DNA PRO from the Aleutians...it's pretty much old school."


Lord Fredric

"So, no bells or whistles?"

(Everybody looking confused)


Brenda

"Dad, what's a bell?"


Lord Fredric

"Just a phrase I read somewhere...so tell me, this DNA program did include everything we needed?"


Blaze

"No, I think it was a trial version...but give me a moment, I might be able to work around it...you know, do some modifications, but I am going to need a sample to do the replication...any takers?"

(Everybody just looking at each other)


Brenda

"You do mean givers right...heh, why don't you volunteer Mark you've got enough hormones for a hundred men, don't you?"


Mark

"Anything to save humanity, what do you need?"


Blaze pointing at Mark's crotch

"Just a little, it'll only hurt for a moment..."


Mark retorts

"Heck no, your not poking anything on me down there!"


Brenda smirking

"Come on Mark, don't worry about that right now...why don't you come with me!"


Mark

"For what?"


Brenda

"The Queen is feeling frisky...you know?"


Mark

"Sure, that sounds good..."


Brenda looking at Lord Fredric

"Dad, Blaze...be right back, won't take a second."


Lord Fredric smiling

"That's my girl, taking one for the team!"


Brenda

"Again..."


Blaze chuckling

"What could we do without her?"

(13 Minutes Later)


Brenda walking back with beaker of semen

"Told you it wouldn't take long!"


Blaze

"So, did it all go well?"


Brenda

"Kinda salty...well come on...science awaits!"

(Scene Switch)

(1 Hour Later)

(Subhuman males standing in line for rescanning)


Subhuman #1 to #2

"What's going on, why do we have to do this?"


Subhuman #2

"Haven't got a clue, something they left out I guess...anything but more of them fish sticks...I'm starting to grow fins!"


Blaze

"Next!"

(Scene Switch)

(2 Hours Later)


EXT: Courtyard-P.M.

Showing males chasing females around.

Timid Boy bringing flower to the girl who was holding stick to his neck.

Blaze and Brenda looking on from balcony.


Blaze

"Went off without a hitch, just as planned...the normal cycle of seek and prey has been achieved!"


Brenda

"This is all starting to make me sick!"


Blaze

"Overkill...too much?"


Brenda pointing down

"No, all these guys trying to hump my leg...disgusting!"


Blaze laughing

"I see your point..."




Scene Close





 





Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Venture To Earth (7)-Big Fish Blues

Kirk Carter@ Chew Bear Productions@ Copyright 2015



VENTURE TO EARTH (7)


Big Fish Blues




(6 Months Later)

The final stages of the "Grand Structure" are nearing completion.
Atlantis is ready to become the Earth's first great city!

Ext: Premature's sleeping quarters.

Lord Fredric and Blaze standing on newly laid sidewalk of fabricated bricks.


Blaze

"Lord...I'm a little concerned about a couple of things?"


Lord Fredric

"Oh...and what would that be?"


Blaze

"Well, kind of occurred to me but, we never considered the sanitary areas...you know, places to take a dump!"


Lord Fredric

"Take a dump?"


Blaze

"Exactamumbo...no crappola!"


Lord Fredric

"No cause for alarm, Mark just hasn't quite figured out the specs on the water system yet..."


Blaze

"What's with the water system?"


Lord Fredric

"Well, how do you figure it works...how do you move turds anyway...it's the water, it washes them down the tube!"


Blaze

"Tube...tube to where?"


Lord Fredric

"Who cares...as long as it's just not sitting around stinking up the place!"


Blaze

"Well, we could use it as fertilizer, maybe dry them out and burn them for heat or cooking?"


Lord Fredric

"Sounds rather unsavory, what are we growing anyway?"


Blaze

"Lima Beans I guess?"


Lord Fredric

"Like heck we are...I was hoping those things would go extinct!"


Blaze

"Actually Lord, they're a great source of protein..."


Lord Fredric

Maybe on your diet, but I'd prefer giant lizards anytime!"


Blaze

"But, there aren't any giant lizards around here, we're surrounded by water!"


Lord Fredric

"That's why we must turn to the sea, the large pond of water which goes on forever...I have the subhumans down there testing the waters...so to speak!"



(Scene Switch)

Ext: Shoreline

Subhumans with crude fishing poles casting out into water.

Suddenly, fish jumps half way out of water and swallows one of the subhumans. 

Others gather around, trying to save swallowed comrade, as the fish manages to eat yet another, then another...then the fish attempted to go for the third to only choke and belch, leaving only the legs hanging out it's mouth.

They finally pull the huge 860 pound Red Fish out of the water.


Subhuman #1 searching for something positive to say

"That is one big fish, the Lord will be pleased!"


"Subhuman #2

"Yea...guess that's what he meant when he discussed sacrifice...with our blessings we shall endure!"


Subhuman #1

"Do we cook it, or can we eat it like it is?"


Subhuman #2

"Seems a bit much for the laser...so much meat..."




(Scene Switch)

Ext: Lord Fredric's Balcony

Lord Fredric and Blaze making chit-chat.

Suddenly looking at the top of this 30 foot fish being drug by them.


Lord Fredric

"Good God, what is that...we're being invaded...what is that?"


Blaze

"According to my memory bank...it's classified as a Big Fish!"


Lord Fredric

"Is that what they look like...almost as big as them Lizards!


Blaze

"Well, the ones we had back on planet Altair were small...you could hold them in your hands and..."


Lord Fredric

"Hands...heavens boy...it's bigger than our ship...you could feed a thousand men and still have leftovers!"


Blaze

"Yes Lord...I must admit, that's a lot of fish right there..."


Subhuman #1 looking up to balcony

"We snag it...trying to catch normal size, but no normal size, just really big...keep attacking fishermen!"


Blaze

"What do you mean...attacking?"


Subhuman #2

"It ate them!"


Blaze

"How many?"


Subhuman #1

"About two and a half..."


Subhuman #2

"Kinda choked on the third."


Blaze

"Choked...what happened?"


Subhuman #1 looking at ground

"Well, it burped up two legs...didn't look good..."


Subhuman #2

"Yea, came up a little short..."


Subhuman #1 giggling to himself

"Couldn't get a leg up, so to speak..."


Blaze

"Come on guys...this isn't funny...Brenda's really going to be down about this!"


Subhuman #1

"Why's that?"


Blaze

"Because, you are all her children...I mean three dead...all turned into fish food and..."


Subhuman #2

"Actually two and a half..."


Blaze

"Alright, two and a half, whatever...such a waste...and it's pretty cold of you two to make fun out of this, although (laughing to himself), the half part...that's just crazy!"


Subhuman #2

"You have to remember, I'm subhuman...I have no emotions...not yet anyway."


Blaze

"Yea, haven't figured out the programming for that yet...lot of work to do!"

(They suddenly hear thumping sounds coming from inside of fish)


Blaze

"Probably just gas bubbles..."


Subhuman #2 listening against wall of giant fish scales

"No...no, it's them!"


Blaze

"You mean...aw come on, hurry up, get the laser!"

(1 Hour Later)

Extracting two gooey subhumans from fish's stomach


Subhuman #3

"Pretty dark in there!"


Subhuman #4 climbing out of cut hole

"That's it, I'm done with this fishing stuff...I'm not bait for the last time...it's his fault!"


Lord Fredric walking down stairs

"What have we got here Lad's...looks like you were sacrificing yourselves there..."


Blaze

"Actually, the fish couldn't wait...we had to cut them out!"


Lord Fredric

"Say what?"


Subhuman #3

"The large creature ate us...one didn't make it."


Subhuman #4

"Yes your Lord, we weren't getting any hits on the bait we were using..."


Lord Fredric

"And just what was that?"


Subhuman #4 wiping himself off

"Green pods...nothing!"


Lord Fredric

"Don't tell me...Lima Beans...even the fish find them disgusting...they are created from a darker place I tell you!"

(Two Hours Later)

After cutting the fish into precision cuts of meat, they have piled them into 12 stacks, twenty feet high.


Lord Fredric

"My my, what an impressive amount of nutrition we have here!"


Blaze

"We simplified it, just cut them into straight lines...like small rectangular sticks."


Lord Fredric

"What shall we call them...ah, we shall call them, what you say...ah yes, Fish Sticks!"


Blaze

"Yea, I remember now...it was Paul the Butcher...bless his sole...I think his wife suggested that...when they were considering how to make portions for hand out..."


Lord Fredric

"Smart woman she was...so that's what we will call them!"


Blaze

"What's that?"


Lord Fredric

"Fish sticks my boy...Mrs. Paul's Fish Sticks!


Blaze

"I like that...real catchy...catch, get it?"


Lord Fredric laughing

"And it shall be done!"




(Scene Close) 










Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Masons Emerge (6)

Kirk Carter@ Chew Bear Productions@ Copyright 2015




VENTURE TO EARTH



Masons Emerge (6)



Opening Scene:


Int: Triangle Second Level

Everyone running around trying to corral premature's who are trying to escape




Lord Fredric

"This was not suppose to happen, don't they have any self-discipline?"



Mark
                                                                                                                                                        "What do you want...group therapy, beat them into submission?"


Lord Fredric

"I have no tolerance for violence, they must have desire, seek their purpose...they have a calling...can't they sense the simple joys of existence?"


Mark

"Okay...now your going over my head...they might understand a good beating at this point...like, ah...this hurts, maybe I won't do that again...and also...you assume everybody understands self-purpose, stop doing that...it's getting old!"


Lord Fredric

"Don't tell me how to dictate positive thoughts...I know, we're all getting old...but I swear...I'm closing in...next season I'll be 180 rotations old, and I could still run circles around you!"


Mark

"Somehow, I would never question your ability, fertility, or agility, but we have workers to gather...so if you wouldn't mind giving us a hand here, Lord sir?"


Lord Fredric

"Good...now that we know who's buttering the bread around here...let's line them up for...what did you call it?"


Mark

"A good beating?"


Lord Fredric

"No, no...didn't you have a gadget or something?"


Blaze running in

"No your Lord, it's a "Memory Translator", kind of a quick lesson with out violence...teaches them to quickly think about bad and good...to think, to reason, to function amongst themselves..."


Lord Fredric

"That's simply amazing...how did you put that thing together?"


Blaze looking at floor

"Actually...John and Paul put that stuff together back on Altar...you remember..our planet that blew up...probably some of our most gifted engineers left to die...great move on that one!"


Lord Fredric

"We didn't have the time, I couldn't bring everyone...so we are without technical genius...is that your point?"


Blaze

"No...just no spare parts...when some of this stuff goes south...no back up!"


Lord Fredric

"It was just poor judgment..."


Blaze

"Let's just say that even the Lord can falter!"


Lord Fredric

"Yea it does, you try being the Lord for a few days...drives you crazy I tell you!"


Mark walks in

"Well...we're ready to start scanning...who did you want to do first...any particular pecking order?"


Brenda yelling in hallway

"Hey, one of your workers tried to touch me!"


Mark

"Where?"


Brenda

"There, ya know...down there!"


Lord Fredric chuckling

"Some things don't have to be taught...nature is automatic...they seek what comes naturally..."


Brenda laughing

"Boys will be boys...I guess?"


Blaze

"Unexplained curiosity, probably a healthy way to approach this..."


Mark

"Wonder if they're any curious females?"


Brenda

"Well..actually, one of them was giving me the eye, smiling at me...curious I guess?"


Lord Fredric

It's predetermined...no social conditioning here..."


(Scene Switch)

(Two Hours Later)


Brenda

"Well, we've got everybody schooled...so to speak, now what?"

(All the the premature's standing in hallway talking and mumbling)


Lord Fredric

"Seems like this would be a good time to make an announcement..."


Blaze

"I wouldn't call it that...more like a lecture in self-purpose or something!"


Brenda

"Dad...come on...face it...it's sermon they need...it's their first since they just got programmed!"


Lord Fredric

"Well, I don't have anything prescripted...have to just wing it...let's see how this goes?"


Blaze

"Yea, just wing it...what do they know...hard to compare something to something they've never experienced anyway...what could happen?"


Lord Fredric

"Bad ratings?"


Brenda walking up to podium

"Now, if I could everybody's attention...I would like for you to take your hats off, but we haven't passed any out yet, so put your hands together and clap, here's my favorite Lord, my Dad!"

(Prematures just standing in disbelief)


Lord Fredric coming to podium

"The word is "faith"...above all...we must believe in ourselves first...finding your place in soceity...praise within your heart as you labor and toll...for work well done...I bequest that all of you are special...each one of you with reason and purpose for your existence...we were brought all here to create a Grand Structure...our, us..our colony is original and with reason...to fulfill the prophecy of mankind..."


Brenda whispering to Blaze

"Laying it on a little thing huh?"


Blaze whispering back

"Yea, just a little


Lord Fredric continuing

"...We are here to establish a new ground for existence...one must start somewhere...as you are all descendants, created by my daughter...her name is Brenda...but you will here forth regard her as your "Queen", and without further a do, here she is...Queen Brenda!"


Brenda blushing, approaching the podium

"No problem, thanks Dad...just like to say that it was my pleasure creating you guys!"

(Everybody starts clapping)


Lord Fredric walking back up to podium

"You were all created to establish Alatia


Blaze whispering to Lord Fredric

"That's Atlantis Lord..."


Lord Fredric

"Yes, yes...Atlantis...and it shall be done!"

(Everybody clapping louder and whistling)


Brenda

"Remember...it takes a village!"

(Suddenly crowd goes totally silent, blank stares)


Lord Fredric

"Teamwork makes it happen, everyone is special, everyone has purpose...thank you again for your participation..."

(Prematures start clapping again)

(Scene Switch)

(Two weeks later)

(Workers standing around watching one worker digging hole)


Blaze walking up to group

"Hey guys...what's going on, why are you all just standing around?"


One worker attempting to speak

"Watch...watching how the hole is dug...we've never seen this before..."


Blaze

"It's a hole...we'll be doing a lot of these...fairly straight forward, nothing too complex here...I mean this is all about teamwork...and there is a lot of work to do here...it's a shared duty...the Lord is depending on all of you, to help pull the load..."


Another worker attempts to speak

"We...we...we need to get organised...we want our benefits!"


Blaze

"Your kidding me right...look, this is an open shop...union representation will not be tolerated...at least not yet!

(Workers grumbling)


(Scene Switch)


Blaze walking into the Lord's office

"Excuse me Lord, but we have a problem?"


Lord Fredric

"And?"


Blaze

"Well the workers who are suppose to be manning the "Vibration Positioners" are already complaining about working conditions and benefits...can you believe that?"


Lord Fredric

"Wonder what that training program had in there...well, just give them a name...a declaration of brotherhood, something showing importance...about all we can do at this point!


Blaze

"What do you suggest...got any ideas?"


Lord Fredric scratching head

"Well, they'll be building everything...lot of brickwork and such...how about..how about we call them the "Masons"?"


Blaze

"Hey, I like that...boy, your good!"


Brenda over in corner of office

"I like it Dad, kind of catchy..."The Masons"!"


Lord Fredric

"The Lord's work is never done...but my goodness...it wasn't that difficult...now go and pass out the good news, they are now affiliated...like a Local 23 or something..."



Blaze

"Right away sir...hope this up's the productivity a bit?"


Lord Fredric

"Everybody wants to belong to something, it was only a matter of time anyway!"





(Scene Close)








Thursday, July 30, 2015

Atlantis, We'll Call It Home (5)

Kirk Carter@ Chew Bear Productions@ Copyright 2015




VENTURE TO EARTH



Atlantis, We'll Call It Home (5)





Flying in on large island about 25 miles across right outside of the area around what is now Cuba and South Florida, they seemingly have discovered their Utopia.


Brenda

"Wow, what is this place...just look at it?"


Lord Fredric

"Looks like an island of sorts...lot's of fluid around, that's a given...I'm not sure Blaze, have any idea where we are?"


Blaze

"Well...we're still on the same planet...Brenda...distance traveled?"


Brenda

"We're just about 15 million cubits or so from where we left...let's hurry up and land, my
 generators are overheating!"


Mark

"Are you talking about you or the Triangle?"


Brenda

"Do you ever think about anything else?"


Mark

"Not usually, but I'm working on it..."


(Landing Triangle)


Lord Fredric

"We shall be here to stay...all this packing up and moving around has me all constipated!"


Blaze

"Fair enough, but remember...this is uncharted territory, we must explore and make sure it has what we need!"


Brenda

"What are you talking about, the whole planet is uncharted...were you hiding maps or something?"


Lord Fredric

"Blaze, can you give me a coordinate?"


Blaze

"According to my sensors, the magnetic flux is 180 degrees from the emanating source of magnetism...which translates to 33 degrees off center!"

(Everybody just staring at Blaze)


Brenda

"That's it?"


Blaze looking down again at sensor

"And ah...third...point three if your getting picky..."


Lord Fredric

"So, here we are now at 33 and a third...perfectly lined up with the Aleutian Star System...I think we will call this..."


Blaze

"How about Atlantis...we will call this Atlantis!"


Brenda

"Sounds catchy...I like it!"

(Scene Switch)

Blaze, Mark, Brenda, and Lord Fredric walking around island populated mostly with Palm Trees and big groves of bushes.


Blaze

"I'm getting some pretty good readings on the "Resonant Senor"...seeing Gold, Quartz, some silvery stuff...place looks loaded!"


Lord Fredric

"We should do well, who knows where this will take us?"


Mark

"Yea, this place just feels good..."


Brenda

"Your right Mark...I like the air...just feels good and we haven't even done it anywhere yet!"


Mark

"We can fix that, come here!"


(1 Day Later)


Int: Triangle-Nursery

Mark removing premature humans from the "Growth Generator".
Everyone in group standing at door.


Mark

"It's amazing how fast this thing matures these guys?"


Lord Fredric

"Yes, it is indeed remarkable...like looking at a group of ten year old's..."


Mark

"Now on to the "Muscle Tone Generator", this should build them up pretty quick!"


Lord Fredric

"It's all about the nutrients...good food in, make for good productive workers...soon my calling shall be met!"


Brenda

"Dad, you make it look so easy, so destined...I'm so happy to have you as my Father!"


Lord Fredric 

"As though you had a choice in the matter...and saying of which...look at you...such a strong female...my given daughter...guiding our fleet!"


Brenda

"What's left of it anyway...do you ever think about Mom?"


Lord Fredric

"Mary was a wonderful sole...but she got a case of fluid in her lungs and left us way too early...I certainly miss her...very much!"


Blaze

"Well, I've located some good points for materials...all we have to do is excavate and assembly the composites...by the way...where are your drawings?


Lord Fredric caught off guard

"Unfortunately, they are just visuals..."


Blaze

"Meaning?"


Lord Fredric

"They're still in my head?"


Blaze

"In your head...all this creativity is still in your head...great, just great...well we need to put you into the "Memory Visualizer" and get a print out...do you mind?"


Lord Fredric

"I would have done it earlier, but nobody bothered to show me how to use the thing...I was afraid I might fry my brain, lose everything!"


Blaze

"It has an instruction manual...you could of at least taken a second to sit down and read it?"


Brenda

"Yea Dad, I thought you read everything?"


Lord Fredric

"Ever try reading one of them things...written by Aliens I tell you!"


Blaze

"Well, come on, let's get you hooked up...gotta start somewhere!"


(1 Hour Later)

Lord Fredric hooked up to "Brain Scanner"


Blaze starts laughing as he's seeing all kinds of images of Lord Fredric's childhood and sexual interludes

"Boy...you certainly got around when you were a boy...some pretty wild stuff here!"


Lord Fredric

"I did my thing...now get your eyes off that screen!"


Blaze still laughing

"Okay, okay...but it would help if you could focus, concentrate on your structure, or whatever you call it?


Lord Fredric

"A Grand Structure...I can see it now!"


Blaze suddenly see's image of Grand Structure, as it comes together piece by piece

"Okay good, now we're getting somewhere!"

(Printer starts spitting out Blueprint)


Brenda runs to door

"Hey guys...we got a little problem on the second level..the premature's are escaping...would you mind giving us a hand here?"


Blaze

"Talk about some bad timing here...come on Lord, they need us!"

(Printer stops)


Lord Fredric

"What...what happened?"


Blaze

"Your work force is trying to evade..."


Lord Fredric

"But, but it's their calling, their purpose is to serve me!"


Brenda

"Yea, why don't you try telling them that?"


Lord Fredric

"I must make an instruction manual I guess...something that describes their protocol!"


Brenda

"They'll probably never understand it..."


Blaze

"Yea...probably think it was written by Aliens!"

(Everybody Laughing)




(Scene Close)