Thursday, July 30, 2015

Atlantis, We'll Call It Home (5)

Kirk Carter@ Chew Bear Productions@ Copyright 2015




VENTURE TO EARTH



Atlantis, We'll Call It Home (5)





Flying in on large island about 25 miles across right outside of the area around what is now Cuba and South Florida, they seemingly have discovered their Utopia.


Brenda

"Wow, what is this place...just look at it?"


Lord Fredric

"Looks like an island of sorts...lot's of fluid around, that's a given...I'm not sure Blaze, have any idea where we are?"


Blaze

"Well...we're still on the same planet...Brenda...distance traveled?"


Brenda

"We're just about 15 million cubits or so from where we left...let's hurry up and land, my
 generators are overheating!"


Mark

"Are you talking about you or the Triangle?"


Brenda

"Do you ever think about anything else?"


Mark

"Not usually, but I'm working on it..."


(Landing Triangle)


Lord Fredric

"We shall be here to stay...all this packing up and moving around has me all constipated!"


Blaze

"Fair enough, but remember...this is uncharted territory, we must explore and make sure it has what we need!"


Brenda

"What are you talking about, the whole planet is uncharted...were you hiding maps or something?"


Lord Fredric

"Blaze, can you give me a coordinate?"


Blaze

"According to my sensors, the magnetic flux is 180 degrees from the emanating source of magnetism...which translates to 33 degrees off center!"

(Everybody just staring at Blaze)


Brenda

"That's it?"


Blaze looking down again at sensor

"And ah...third...point three if your getting picky..."


Lord Fredric

"So, here we are now at 33 and a third...perfectly lined up with the Aleutian Star System...I think we will call this..."


Blaze

"How about Atlantis...we will call this Atlantis!"


Brenda

"Sounds catchy...I like it!"

(Scene Switch)

Blaze, Mark, Brenda, and Lord Fredric walking around island populated mostly with Palm Trees and big groves of bushes.


Blaze

"I'm getting some pretty good readings on the "Resonant Senor"...seeing Gold, Quartz, some silvery stuff...place looks loaded!"


Lord Fredric

"We should do well, who knows where this will take us?"


Mark

"Yea, this place just feels good..."


Brenda

"Your right Mark...I like the air...just feels good and we haven't even done it anywhere yet!"


Mark

"We can fix that, come here!"


(1 Day Later)


Int: Triangle-Nursery

Mark removing premature humans from the "Growth Generator".
Everyone in group standing at door.


Mark

"It's amazing how fast this thing matures these guys?"


Lord Fredric

"Yes, it is indeed remarkable...like looking at a group of ten year old's..."


Mark

"Now on to the "Muscle Tone Generator", this should build them up pretty quick!"


Lord Fredric

"It's all about the nutrients...good food in, make for good productive workers...soon my calling shall be met!"


Brenda

"Dad, you make it look so easy, so destined...I'm so happy to have you as my Father!"


Lord Fredric 

"As though you had a choice in the matter...and saying of which...look at you...such a strong female...my given daughter...guiding our fleet!"


Brenda

"What's left of it anyway...do you ever think about Mom?"


Lord Fredric

"Mary was a wonderful sole...but she got a case of fluid in her lungs and left us way too early...I certainly miss her...very much!"


Blaze

"Well, I've located some good points for materials...all we have to do is excavate and assembly the composites...by the way...where are your drawings?


Lord Fredric caught off guard

"Unfortunately, they are just visuals..."


Blaze

"Meaning?"


Lord Fredric

"They're still in my head?"


Blaze

"In your head...all this creativity is still in your head...great, just great...well we need to put you into the "Memory Visualizer" and get a print out...do you mind?"


Lord Fredric

"I would have done it earlier, but nobody bothered to show me how to use the thing...I was afraid I might fry my brain, lose everything!"


Blaze

"It has an instruction manual...you could of at least taken a second to sit down and read it?"


Brenda

"Yea Dad, I thought you read everything?"


Lord Fredric

"Ever try reading one of them things...written by Aliens I tell you!"


Blaze

"Well, come on, let's get you hooked up...gotta start somewhere!"


(1 Hour Later)

Lord Fredric hooked up to "Brain Scanner"


Blaze starts laughing as he's seeing all kinds of images of Lord Fredric's childhood and sexual interludes

"Boy...you certainly got around when you were a boy...some pretty wild stuff here!"


Lord Fredric

"I did my thing...now get your eyes off that screen!"


Blaze still laughing

"Okay, okay...but it would help if you could focus, concentrate on your structure, or whatever you call it?


Lord Fredric

"A Grand Structure...I can see it now!"


Blaze suddenly see's image of Grand Structure, as it comes together piece by piece

"Okay good, now we're getting somewhere!"

(Printer starts spitting out Blueprint)


Brenda runs to door

"Hey guys...we got a little problem on the second level..the premature's are escaping...would you mind giving us a hand here?"


Blaze

"Talk about some bad timing here...come on Lord, they need us!"

(Printer stops)


Lord Fredric

"What...what happened?"


Blaze

"Your work force is trying to evade..."


Lord Fredric

"But, but it's their calling, their purpose is to serve me!"


Brenda

"Yea, why don't you try telling them that?"


Lord Fredric

"I must make an instruction manual I guess...something that describes their protocol!"


Brenda

"They'll probably never understand it..."


Blaze

"Yea...probably think it was written by Aliens!"

(Everybody Laughing)




(Scene Close)










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